Sunday, 9 June 2013









Of all the things she might have asked of him, knowing as they both do the hold she exerts, and too that little she assumes of his influence, for her to request Bazooka gum is as unexpected as it is exactly in keeping with her character.
deleted name: Bazooka gum? How much? I mean, are we
ache1: I don’t know, can you, it doesn’t have to be... Say a boxload? How many’s in a box?
Uncapping his pen, he makes a note
deleted name (writing): Bazooka gum, box.
before asking
deleted name: And that’s it? A box of gum?
ache1: And some Moosehead beers.
her words crashing into his so that he is forced to comprehend them at a fraction of remove from their hearing. No stranger himself to the use of alcohol in the quietening of his own spectres, still her request startles him a little, the sudden consideration that it is this as forms the main element of her want, the gum itself little more than a concession to that status her age forces them both to acknowledge.
deleted name: Moosehead?
and then before he even realises he is remembering,
deleted name: Not Coors?
Too, there is the notion that she could just as easily charge any drink in the hotel’s bars she might want to his account, all of it even, there being no difference at all to the all-round end result, for either of them.
ache1: Not Coors, no. Moosehead.
deleted name: I’ll make a note
and then appending it underneath the already-written line.
deleted name (clearing throat): And how much ehm, how much would you like?
ache1: Fuck, I don’t know. How many’s in a box of that? Send me a box and we’ll take it from there.
This can pass without comment, or this cannot pass. This cannot pass.
deleted name: Would you say you have a good memory?
ache1: Sorry would I what?
deleted name: Hang on...
ache1: No I didn’t hear what you said, what, would I say what was it?
deleted name: Okay, have you g-, get a pen if you haven’t got one, because I want you to write this down. Have you got a pen there?
ache1: Hang on
leaning across to scrabble a crayon and a blank sheet of the hotel stationery from off the bedside cabinet before clamping the telephone between ear and shoulder, ready to write,
ache1: Okay, proceed.
deleted name (with a deal of deliberation): I want you to write this down. Ready?
pausing for effect, before
deleted name: You only throw the dice until the dice throw you.
ache1 (as she writes): Yep, yep, throw the dice, they throw you, got it, got it.
but without, of course, in any way at all actually getting it.